God help you, my friends,
The cares of life, royal service,
And riotous feasts friendship,
And in the sweet mystery of love!
God help you, my friends,
And in the storms, and worldly sorrow,
At the edge of a strange, in a deserted sea,
And in the dark abysses of the earth!
Nobody confuses, that the error in this verse?
It is necessary, to stand “God help you…”, but not “God help…”
Who watches this page? correct, Please and Other Poems error check, t.k.dumayu, that they are not the only ones here.
I agree
verse is good but there are mistakes pay attention to this!!!